Entered into the age...
Where people find their soulmate...
When I see two beautiful love birds...
I asked myself, what is love...??
Some says, the bell rings in the heart...
While other says, they gives you the feeling of completion...
Friends says, they makes us feel special...
Mum says, it is something natural...
But I still wonder...
What is love...??
When their touch,erases our pain...
Their smile makes us insane...
Their presence is only thing we need...
Spending more time with them,is our greed...
But I still wonder...
Is this love...??
Those...
Words of comfort...
Tight hugs...
Beautiful conversations...
Love letters...
Long walks...
Silent talks...
Dancing in rain...
Smiling in pain...
Sweet arguements...
Flowers dat speaks thousand words...
And I still wonder...
Is this love...??
When he understands our unspoken words...
Wipes our falling tears...
Always there whenever we need them...
Holds you tight when we are in fear...
Looking at him I wonder...
Is this love...??
Their presence blooms the beautiful flowers in our heart...
Their smile illuminate lights in our eyes...
Suddenly the worst day becomes the most beautiful day in our life...
And it forces me to wonder...
Is it love...??
Then I feel its not love, its an infatuation...
That at this age, tends to happen...
Love is something which is priceless...
No language in dis world can express...
...Chinky Sanghvi
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this ones a good poem...the best one so far..which actualy looks like a poem!!good ur learning girl...keep it up!!!do corect certain grammatical mistakes...ask ur grammatical friend!!!lol....
ReplyDeletemiru
*thumbs up*
ReplyDeletenice one dude..
@ mirali: she'll get over da grammar errors once she develops da writing habit..
@chinky: keep it up..!
@ mirali: imma all cool wid it.. relax now..
ReplyDeletep.s. did u mean: "ohhh dont take me wrong" (and not wrongly)
:P :D
@manish: thank god ur cool with it...u sound like n angry young man...n i knew u wud correct me on this..i had already posted n then i ws feeling quite lazy to change it(i cant even edit after postin as its nt my blog),so jus left it d way it ws!!n y do u keep on correcting ppl on their mistakes?its nt a bad habit..bt its nt necessary that every1 has a masters degree in eng language!!
ReplyDeletemiru
@ mirali: i correct, cos i dont like/believe in mistakes.. second thing.. thrs no master's in english language but PhD in English Literature :P
ReplyDeleteAnd also take care dat u dont make a mistake at first.. so dat thrs nuin left to be corrected/edited.
And knowingly doin mistakes is sucha lame/loser thing to do..
and im still cool wid it.. i don really get annoyed/angry.. dats a sheer waste of time.. n i wana make da most of it..
p.s. im being very humble n not rude.. (get dat rite dudette.. ;))
@manish: by masters degree i jus meant dat no one here is a master in dat lang..neway, n mistakes r a part of life, no one likes dem, n u dnt hav to believe in dem u hav to learn frm dem..ur doin a good job by correctin them bt everyone mite nt take that positively..i hope u understandin wat i mean cos m nt able to explain it clearly..
ReplyDeleten mistakes r always commited unknowingly..i think so den i dnt knw...n ye getin angry is truly a waste of time..
nw m feelin dat ur being humble!!
miru..
@ mirali: don get nervous babe.. take it easy.. [;)]
ReplyDeletehahahaha...
@manish: who said m getting nervous..and for what wud i?lol....
ReplyDeletemiru